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By feeweewv

Today offers me something

refreshing and new

Something my heart yearns for...

peace and happiness

I see you

hanging over me

like fresh linen

inviting...

Wanting you to hold me close

so I can breathe you in

Then you fell on me

When I needed you most

I submit

comfortably

Tangled up in you

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G-Ma Johnson Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

oh sweet one...I do know the feeling...:O) Hugs

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Jess Killmenow 2 years ago

"Like fresh linen"

Very nice, Felicia

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feeweewv Hub Author 2 years ago

It is a good feeling isn't it G-Ma. A new day and a new chance at finding that "thing" that makes you smile.

bb 2 years ago

bb, u really need to write a book, or atleast teachaclass, this is too good. thats y i love u, abit of yo smartness is rubbin off onto me,hehehe. really nice

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feeweewv Hub Author 2 years ago

BB, u know I love u right?

4ever Mo profile image

4ever Mo 2 years ago

Nice!

Roger 19 months ago

I will love to be that he for u always.You are very much talented.my hearts desires now just the character feeling all that says the poem.Keep up.

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